Monday, February 16, 2009

when i'm not drinking australian wine


'i like the way she
breaks her (her) lines' the way the

music introducing no repeats for house (the tv
with cello sounds) like like how the mind can conjure

i like the way curtis teases how curtis makes me roll roll
how blogpost armantrout

her third third way i i like the way she takes her time
(is it the bach?what number?what conductor?) the glass late like

2 Comments:

Anonymous Paul said...

What a fascinating poem. Is it a word tumble or an architecture, I'm not sure, but I like it.

16/2/09 12:48  
Blogger Louise said...

hi paul,

thanks for your comment. as to the intention - it is a little of both, but i did follow a structure that i had in mind at the outset.

17/2/09 07:44  

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